I didn't receive any feedback from my second pitch. In this one what I did different was introduce my name and mentioned our recently new partnership with a good friend who makes nut butters.
Hi Cameron, I thoroughly enjoyed watching your pitch! I think that it was great to include another resource and company that you could work with/ help your venture. Also, I liked having you explain the process of ordering the peanut butter and jelly sandwich and comparing it to Moe's. Bringing a commonly known restaurant as a comparison makes it easier for people to visualize the product. Great post!!
Hi Cameron! I think your pitch was very well done and you seemed really confident in your idea which I think is what made it so good. I also liked how you explained exactly how the shop would be set up and everything I would see and do as I walked into your shop. It seems like you really have perfected your idea by finding someone to partner with.
Hi Cameron,
ReplyDeleteI thoroughly enjoyed watching your pitch! I think that it was great to include another resource and company that you could work with/ help your venture. Also, I liked having you explain the process of ordering the peanut butter and jelly sandwich and comparing it to Moe's. Bringing a commonly known restaurant as a comparison makes it easier for people to visualize the product. Great post!!
Hi Cameron! I think your pitch was very well done and you seemed really confident in your idea which I think is what made it so good. I also liked how you explained exactly how the shop would be set up and everything I would see and do as I walked into your shop. It seems like you really have perfected your idea by finding someone to partner with.
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